I'm going to comment on this review, but the comments apply to the previous reviews too. In all of the reviews you have discussed many of the relevant and more interesting themes and ideas, so that's good :) You have taken on board the suggestions for structure, and have included useful quotes... I want you to have a look at the Harvard guide, to see how you need to reference the quotes though, as at the moment you are not including the necessary information. For example, after the quote, you need the author's surname and the date the quote was originally published, so "Blah blah blah..."(Smith, 2010) for example. You then need much more information in the bibliography - check the guide for full details here - https://www.uca.ac.uk/library/academic-support/harvard-referencing/
Note that the date that is included in the reference is the date of publication, while the date accessed is the present date...
For the forthcoming project, I would suggest getting the review written the same week that you watch the film, as that way I can feedback on each one in more detail :)
Hi Sandy,
ReplyDeleteI'm going to comment on this review, but the comments apply to the previous reviews too.
In all of the reviews you have discussed many of the relevant and more interesting themes and ideas, so that's good :) You have taken on board the suggestions for structure, and have included useful quotes... I want you to have a look at the Harvard guide, to see how you need to reference the quotes though, as at the moment you are not including the necessary information. For example, after the quote, you need the author's surname and the date the quote was originally published, so "Blah blah blah..."(Smith, 2010) for example. You then need much more information in the bibliography - check the guide for full details here - https://www.uca.ac.uk/library/academic-support/harvard-referencing/
Note that the date that is included in the reference is the date of publication, while the date accessed is the present date...
For the forthcoming project, I would suggest getting the review written the same week that you watch the film, as that way I can feedback on each one in more detail :)
Thank you for your feedback! I will try to improve my reviews in the future.
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